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2009年1月14日水曜日

World of Garp


I watched World of Garp which is one of movie. The movie’s original author is John Irving. He is writer. He lives in America.
I have to watch the movie because the movie is used by class, and I have to write review of the movie. However, I cannot understand what the writer wants to say the movie. I think the answer is guns society or human relationship. I write the review by next Monday, but I do not have any inspirations.
[82 words]

2008年12月22日月曜日

Portfolios

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Student ID: vwxyz
Please replace "vwxyz" (above) with
the last five digits of your student number
(without quotation marks).




Portfolio for Writing IV,
Section 1a OR 1c


[Please delete the unsuitable class section and "OR" (above), along with this line of remarks.]

(See: Note 1, below)




0.0. Overview




Reviews, Posts, Words, and More

(See: Note 2, below.)

[Please embed your proto-portfolios here; then remove this line of remarks, including the square brackets.]




1.0. Essays

(See: Note 3, below.)

Please complete this table with data gathered from essays on your blog. See the Key (below) for definitions of the symbols in row one, and complete columns four through nine with numerical values (0, 1, 2, 3, ...).






















































































































































































































































































































1.1. Showcase



Short titles with links
Dates
yy.mm.dd

W
C
L
P
M
Website review 08.09.29 (375+ words)
http://www.japan-guide.com/e/e2158.html08.09.28
08.10.11
5
5
352
393
6
0
1
1
0
4
0
0
Favorite place(-s) 08.10.20 (450+ words)



WR My favorite place

08.10.19
3
454
1
0
0
0
Mrs. Doubtfire 08.11.04 (500+ words)



MR: Mrs Doubt

08.11.04
4
452
12
0
1
0
Community life 08.11.17 (default length*)



special place of my community

08.11.17
4
256
0
0
3
0
Kumamoto's best-kept secrets 08.12.01 (5+ ¶¶)



Secret of Kumamoto

0812.02
5
283
0
0
2
0
Learning with computers 2008.12.15 (6+ ¶¶)



Learning with computer

08.12.10
5
310
0
0
0
0


















Totals---
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Key:



¶: number of paragraphs five (5) or more sentences in length



W: number of words



C: number of comments



L: number of links



P: number of photos or other graphics
M: number of other media included in post
*: "long enough to cover the ... [communities] you choose," Writing Studio Blog, Preparation for Next Essays, 2008.10.29)



1.2. Best Essay

Selection and Assessment: Which of those six assigned essays do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.





  • I feel the best essay is "My favorite place". That because I like the places the best, and I could told how I like there.



2.0. Comments





































































































































































































































Showcase
Titles of posts with links
Dates of comments yy.mm.dd
Numbers of words in comments
Qualities of comments**
2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog*




2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog*



2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog*



MR: Mrs Doubt

08.11.15
63
She gave me a advice. So I can make better post!
2.4. Most comments on:
Titles of posts with link
Dates of posts yy.mm.dd Total number of words in comments
Qualities of comments**
2.4.1. Any one of your essays*

"Kagoshima no.2"
2008.09.08
30

I have good memory with thecomment.
2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments?
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2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments?
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2.4.2. Any of your other posts*




2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments?
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2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments?---
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* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post. That is, explain briefly what makes them good comments.




2.5. Recent comments display

Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example, in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where, or why not? Please explain.






  • ... I have sidebar. I can check the comments at there.



2.6. Additional reflections on comments







  • [Please remove these remarks, including the square brackets; then write out your reflections on both giving and receiving comments here.]



  • ....




3.0. Book Reviews































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































3.1. ShowcaseShort titles
with links
Dates (yy.mm.dd)WordsComments
Example:
Vampire Killer
07.05.16
39
1
2-01



BR:01 The Lost Ship

08.08.11
176
0
2-02

BR:02 In the Frame
2008.09.02

112

0
2-03
BR:03 Alissa
2008.09.15

252

0
2-04

BR:04 The Hunt for Gold

2008.09.22

261

0
2-05

BR:05 The Evil Genie
2008.10.3

281
0
2-06
BR:06 London
2008.10.13

143
0
2-07

BR:07 Which one killed her
2008.10.20

201
0
2-08

BR:08 Animal Babies

2008.10.26
61
0
2-09

BR:09 Funny Fish

2008.11.02

68

0
2-10

BR:10 The Snowman

2008.11.05

53

0
2-11
BR:11 The Egg Hunt
2008.11.10

67

0
2-12
BR:12 The Carnival
2008.11.13

46
0
2-13
BR:13 How to Be Healthy

2008.11.21

53

0
2-14 BR:14 The Magic Key

2008.12.04

64
0
2-15 BR:15 Robin Hood
2008.12.09

137
0
2-16
BR:16 What was it Like?
2008.12.04
74

0
2-17
BR:17 Rotten Apples
2008.12.15
112

0
2-18
BR:18 TINKERS FARM
2008.12.19
81
0

2-19
BR:19 What comes in threes?
2008.12.21
40
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Totals:
2282

0

Note
: Please calculate and list book review Totals for words and comments without including those from the example (above).





3.2. Best Book Review

Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.




I choice the book review because I like the writer. I read many times.



4.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking, & Media
































































































































































































































































































































Showcase
Yes
No
4.1. Does your blog display an archive?


4.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts?

4.1.2. Is the archive organized by month?

4.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar?



4.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar?

5.2.1. Do your labels include these required labels (typed accurately):---
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  • "books" (plural) AND "reviews" (plural)








  • "essays" (plural) AND "portfolios" (plural, without "proto-")








  • "quickposts" (plural, with no space between quick and posts)








  • "links" (plural) AND "media" (plural)








  • "movies" (plural) AND "websites" (plural)








  • "brainstorms" (or "brainstorming"), "essay prep.," AND "free-writing" (or "free-writes")


4.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels?







  • How many other labels have you attached to three (3) or more posts?






    • five other labels attached to three or more posts
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4.3. Links & media---
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4.3.1. Does your blog include photos or other graphics?







  • Does your blog profile include a photo or graphic representation?








  • How many of your blog posts this semester include photos or other graphics?






    • 53 posts including photos or other graphics
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4.3.2. Does your blog include posts with multiple links?







  • How many of your posts this semester include three (3) or more links?






    • 1 post including three or more links (including this portfolio!)
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4.3.3. Does your blog include other media?







  • How many of your blog posts this semester include other media?



  •  Only one posts including other media
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  • What kind(-s) of media have you included in posts this semester? Please list the kinds here:






    1. ...YouTube



    2. ...Wikipedia



    3. ... Mixi

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  • What media content that you originally produced, if any, do your blog posts for this semester contain? Please list and explain each item briefly, and add short links and dates (yy.mm.dd) for reference.






    1. ... (YouTube, 2008.09.24)







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4.4. Overall presentation

What have you done to enhance the overall presentation of your blog? List and explain the three most important content, display, formatting, layout, or other presentation changes that you have made on your blog this semester.






  1. ...I feel making review is very good for me.



  2. ...I think reading friend's blog and post my comennt is usuful.



  3. ...The best things are comennt by my friends. It could help me making next blog.




5.0. Additional reflections on your blog and your writing on it

Please feel free to include reflections on both spring and fall semester work, as well as on the content of this portfolio (proto-portfolios, showcases, and reflections).






  • ...I have many posts this blog, but I feel it is nt so usuful.



  • ...Movie review is good, but book review is not so fun. It is tired, and I cannot get knowledge.



  • ... If I have to take this class, I want to understand the class more easily.




6.0. Advice and suggestions for yourself, your peers, and your successors







  • ...I shoul write my reviews more carefuly.



  • ...I realize how to make better review by friend's comennt.



  • ... When I write a review or report, I shoul search for the information more.

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Notes:






  1. This portfolio template derives from the templates for Writing IIIc and Writing IVc portfolios (2007-08), and Writing III, §§1a & 1c (Fall, 2008).



  2. Please use the same code in section 0.0 that you used to embed your proto-portfolios (PPFs) in the footer of your blog, which you should already have revised to display your 2nd (fall) semester PPF first.



  3. The essays section (1.0. Essays, above) derives from Proto-Portfolio 2-02 (2008).
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2008年11月4日火曜日

MR: Mrs Doubt


I feel warm by this movie. I can meet to my family anytime if I want to meet them. However, Daniel cannot meet to his children because he was divorced his wife. He meets only one time by week. He loves his children, and his children are too. This movie teaches some important things to us.

This movie’s them is that family is so warm. I was surprised Daniel changed to woman to meet his children. If I were Daniel, I would not change woman and I stand to meet child. Daniel tries to change himself as house keeper. He learns cooking. He did not do anything about housework before he was divorced. However, he became a house keeper, and he cleans the big house, cooks them dinner and tries to understand them feeling. Therefore, after the parents were divorced their children love both mother and father.

I wonder that why his wife did not aware to the house keeper is Daniel. He (Doubtfire) knows place of furniture in the house. Moreover, they spent much time together. Why she could not aware it is he? It may be that when they met again as house keeper, Daniel already changed.
I do not want him to be my father or husband. He retired only his thought, and he is trouble. He behaves just his think. I would divorce if I were his wife. However, his wife understands his good points. He behaves like a comedian. She is irritable by him, but she always smile by his act. Children like him. He is funny with children. When he (Doubtfire) met them first time, he (she) knows their favorite things. He is always good father about children. Wife also works, so she often to back late at home. After Doubtfire came their house, she felt comfort to stay house. It is that their house is always comfortable, but she has not any space of her mentality. Moreover, Daniel also did not help anything about housework/ He never done cooking since became house keeper. He also did not think about his wife. However, they realized that they did not think each other.

Through the story, I learned some points. That is family, love, thinking each other, and change oneself. I think if ones want to change, the person can change. I think that it is important to change to someone or something. However, Daniel should aware more early than divorced or done housekeeping. It was late after regret. However, it is just a movie story, so all things have done well. But we could not do the same. The movie said us that we should realize that “family is important” and “life is only one time”.
[452 words]

2008年9月5日金曜日

MR:An eraser inside my brain

The girl came from a good family met a carpenter who was perverse. They fell in love.
They got married soon. The girl was careless person. She often forget where was theirs house.

However, the careless became heavy. She went to hospital. The doctor said her that she is Alzheimer’s disease. The disease will kill faster her brain than her body. She would forget everything. Even if she loves him so much, the memory was lost.

One day, she called him another man’s name, but her memory was unclear. She thought that the man was her last boyfriend. The man had shock. The shock was so heavy, but he understood her disease. She realized her said. She apologized him by letter. She was gone. The house was empty. He read the letter.

She wrote that you are the most important memory and I must not forget it. I hope that the last memory will be about my life with you.

I like this movie. When I watched this movie, I was high school student. I had a boyfriend. I thought that if I were her or him. I would not be able to love someone like them. I would shirk.
The lines moved me.

[204 words]

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